Its sad to see someone you know turn into someone you knew.
You remember the times you used to spend together.
You see them walk past by you and your body just fills with sadness knowing the fact that they see you as a no one, as somebody invisible.
It was as if you were never really there and your face obtains an expression of complete misery.
If you were to have one wish, you will hope to recover that lost friendship you once had.
You remember the times you used to spend together.
You see them walk past by you and your body just fills with sadness knowing the fact that they see you as a no one, as somebody invisible.
It was as if you were never really there and your face obtains an expression of complete misery.
If you were to have one wish, you will hope to recover that lost friendship you once had.
its really good. i like it alot. :}
ReplyDeleteLike the poem
ReplyDeleteI hope that our long lost friend does come back
i like it
ReplyDeleteu really set the mood of the poem
i love your poem karen.
ReplyDeleteits true of what you say in your poem
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Nice poem you express it very well..
ReplyDeletenice poem karen i like it very much keep the good work
ReplyDeletenice work karen i liked it alot
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OMG kAREN i liKE DiS SOOOOO MUCHH!!
ReplyDeleteREAllY DiS iS A VERY GOOD ONE i GiVE U PROPSz
i NOE U MUST FEEl =]
-*HONEyCOMBz
opps i mest up i meant i noe how u must feel lol
ReplyDeleteyea i agree with eli i hope our long last friends do come back.
ReplyDeleteAnd i know how you feel
Nice job
ReplyDeleteI like your poem
good job karen. :)
ReplyDeleteit was good poem
I LIKE YOUR POEM...ITS NICE.
ReplyDelete& YEA THATS TRUE.
SMILEYBABEY♥
yeah i hope your lost
ReplyDeletefriend comes baq
good poem...
good poem i like it alot...it has alot of emotion in it, great job
ReplyDelete:)~Stephanie O~
I like your poem te big words, details, and everything also the poem sets that sad miserable kind of mood so you did a good job!!!!
ReplyDeleteErnie